The spring wind is blown green willow, the wind in the hot summer, the
autumn wind blowing yellow rice, winter wind blowing the white earth, a wind
blowing up my soul.
The exam is every student work achievement exhibition, performance of
the direct impact on students' mood. After final exam, transcripts of home that
day, I'm disappointed urgently, my English result is 78 points, after reading the
report, I will not to utter a single word to lie in bed, staring at the ceiling ... ... I
do not know how long after, the door suddenly opened, mother came in and
sat down beside me, not looking at me, suddenly, on my mother angrily
shouted:" you stay in bed doing? You failed the exam is you don't work hard,
can this strange who ... ..." Waiting for her to finish, I cried.
Tired of crying, to dry the tears, I looked at my mother. The mother saw
my heart calm down, she also restored the true colours, say affectionately to
me:" the exam is important, but your subjective effort is more important, as
long as you try your best, your life is no '. '" ... ..." My eyes are bright, spirit lifts,
confidence and back to me again. Love is like the wind, take my bad mood was
not the least trace was found. Blowing, my mind blowing a fresh.
修改后：
After the final exam, . When I the final transcript, I was totally disappointed. staring at the ceiling. I did not know how long it lasted, suddenly, my mother came in and sat down beside me. She said to me angrily, "What are you doing here? Why you lie on the bed? You failed the exam because you don't work hard... "
Tired of crying, I dried the tears and looked at my mother. She saw I have calmed down, she said affectionately to me, "The exam is very important, and you must try your best to work hard. Then you can have a better future..." My eyes were turning bright and I felt confident again. I made up my mind to work harder and never give up.
修改老师：Crystal 老师
初一:张瑞洋